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“Crutch”

Borders is my favorite place in the world to hang out.  Sad, maybe.  But I like it.  There are many regulars who evidently share my sentiment because I always see them there.  One guy in particular stands out.  He hangs outside playing his guitar.  One day I sat outside while he played, and wrote the following poem.  But it needed a title, and I knew the title had to be his name.  I didn’t feel comfortable saying, “Excuse me.  I just wrote a poem about  you.  What’s your name?” so I left it untitled.  But as I was leaving, his sheet music flew my way.  He thanked me as I gave it back to him, after reading his name at the top of the page.


“Crutch”
 
I overheard him say he’s a lawyer.
And I thought he was just some
Bald-headed, blue jeans, gi-tar playin’
Nostalgic ex-hippie
Who strummed outside the bookstore
Just because he’s a free spirit.

I like to sit at the frail, metal table
Listening to him.

As he plays
I’m reminded of love,
Sex,
And people.

And when it gets too cold,
I sit at the frail, metal table.

Because I want to be reminded—
Of love,
Sex,
And people.

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About Daniel Romo

Author of When Kerosene's Involved (Mojave River Press, 2014) and Romancing Gravity (Silver Birch Press, 2013). I'm partial to prose poems. Alliteration. And fragments.

5 responses »

  1. Very good…I like that a lot. Thank you for sending me this link and for reading my post about crutches.

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  2. I really like this, and the process by which it acquired it’s title.
    I like how you single out sex, it comes off a little cacophonous.

    “Bald-headed, blue jeans, gi-tar playin’
    Nostalgic ex-hippie”
    I also loved these lines. It gives you a visual and sort of lets you see who the man is behind the suit. Everyone portrays the lawyer as something negative in a more familial way. Here, maybe not particularly negative, you portray him in a way the majority of society wouldnt.
    Great read. (:

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    • Thanks Jenny. I see the guy there all the time and I’d like to show it to him. I think being a fellow artist, he’d appreciate it. But it would still be kinda’ weird.

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      • I don’t think so at all. But I’m a little weird so maybe that’s saying something. Ha.

      • Funny, I just came back from Borders and he was there. I think it’s best this way. Kinda’ keep the anonymity behind the poet.
        🙂

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